10-Minute Writing Exercise - Page 12

DACDjr · April 11th, 2012, 09:46 PM

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One day I will have to courage to walk away from him.
One day I will have the strength to pick up and move on.
One day I will not be mentally abused anymore.
He is blind and can not see how fast he is pushing me away.
He is blind on how much he is actually hurting his family.
If I could turn the clock back, I would have listened to my mom.
I would not have taken that step, the fateful step. The step that would break my heart, and damage my soul.. Broke my spirit it many many ways.. What good am I to my children when I can not even smile at them.... What is the purpose.......

Wolf_angel · April 13th, 2012, 08:34 AM

Purpose is to follow your heart yet sometimes we are blinded by what is shown initially. Thus we learn, grow, and evolve. New purpose is to become stronger and thus move onward. Hugs Dacd

DACDjr · April 13th, 2012, 02:03 PM

Amen Wolfie....

DACDjr · April 13th, 2012, 02:04 PM

Please don't mind me.. I just ramble on.. This is my vent spot... Without mom or grandma around I have no where else to vent.. So ....

IRISH_EYES_99 · April 13th, 2012, 10:20 PM

Vent away DACDjr. If it helps & it's a good way to get things off your chest, then do it.
Hope things start straightening out for you.

Wolf_angel · April 14th, 2012, 09:21 AM

Ok so that means IRISH is Grandma who is ever so sweet and wise and thus I be Mom LOL Seriously just vent away. I know I do here often so why not you? Hugs

Elusive Unicorn · January 6th, 2013, 11:09 PM

Sometimes we are in a dark place. I know about that pit and I hated it. I clawed myself out of it. I refuse to go back. Every time someone would try and give me a hand up I would slip back in. Took me doing it to get it done. I said to myself no more. Then I finally saw the light of day again. Sometimes the only person you can depend on is yourself when you are in the pit. Some people never get out of it. Some never want to or have lost the way up. Kind of like when divers dive deep and can not find the way up to the surface. We all have dark places inside us. They are not bad to have they help us learn our true strength. Just try not to get lost in there and maybe bring a flashlight to find the way out again.

Wolf_angel · January 7th, 2013, 11:46 AM

So eloquent and moving. To the point and shows us what is there. To know we can survive and move to the light. Hugs Good Job Elusive Unicorn

Elusive Unicorn · January 7th, 2013, 08:27 PM

tyvm Wolfie has taken me a bit to even feel like writing.

Wolf_angel · January 9th, 2013, 08:55 AM

In the Shadow of You
I am eclipsed by things of the past
Like the Moon that rides in the night sky
It always seems to linger as its cast
Yet despite it all I work to move on
To where the sun is shining all day long
Making me feel like a new person
Then I will know I am finally free of you
Where my yesterdays are finally laid to rest.

Elusive Unicorn · January 9th, 2013, 11:15 AM

I like that wolf angel

Wolf_angel · January 9th, 2013, 06:34 PM

Thank You Very Much Elusive Unicorn! I thought it very to the point of my life right now. So if it resonanates within another all the more power to us. Hugs

crazymomma · January 9th, 2013, 11:00 PM

Nice job ladies

Wolf_angel · January 10th, 2013, 12:54 AM

Thank you but I was inspired by Elusive and my own life circumstances of now. Hugs

IRISH_EYES_99 · February 18th, 2013, 08:21 PM

Writing 10 min starting now: Ok it's time I got back on the ball of life. To increase my writing, help to promote memories for my kids & grandkids. Where did their parents grand parents come from. A bit of back ground for them. What life was like way back when we were kids. Is it all that different or the same in different ways? Kids have been after me for this.
so I'm practicing 10 min of undisturbed writing.. Ok I know the person writing this may be a bit disturbed oh well get thee over it. lol. I still have about 6 min left. What was life like in the 50s, & beyond, and perhaps a bit before. I'll never really tell, then again will I... hmmmmm. We shall see. Hope you all have an absolutely wonderful day, week, month, year. Don't put off everything for another day. The day may come & you find you can no longer do that which you wanted so badly to do. Am I making sense or nonsense good question. You have to decide for yourself? Has what I said / written make sense to you? Are you able to respond in a positive way? Am I giving you food for thought or not?

April 11th, 2012, 09:46 PM	#166
DACDjr Senior Memeber Join Date: May 2001 Location: Indiana Posts: 864	ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh (breath) ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh (breath) ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhh (breath) One day I will have to courage to walk away from him. One day I will have the strength to pick up and move on. One day I will not be mentally abused anymore. He is blind and can not see how fast he is pushing me away. He is blind on how much he is actually hurting his family. If I could turn the clock back, I would have listened to my mom. I would not have taken that step, the fateful step. The step that would break my heart, and damage my soul.. Broke my spirit it many many ways.. What good am I to my children when I can not even smile at them.... What is the purpose....... __________________ KAP-AJS

April 13th, 2012, 08:34 AM	#167
Wolf_angel A survivor of chaos Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: Where my heart is Posts: 3,147	Purpose is to follow your heart yet sometimes we are blinded by what is shown initially. Thus we learn, grow, and evolve. New purpose is to become stronger and thus move onward. Hugs Dacd __________________ May you walk in the shadow of the Great Spirit~To help others is a special gift we can either give or take~The more you give the more you receive~

April 13th, 2012, 02:03 PM	#168
DACDjr Senior Memeber Join Date: May 2001 Location: Indiana Posts: 864	Amen Wolfie.... __________________ KAP-AJS

April 13th, 2012, 02:04 PM	#169
DACDjr Senior Memeber Join Date: May 2001 Location: Indiana Posts: 864	Please don't mind me.. I just ramble on.. This is my vent spot... Without mom or grandma around I have no where else to vent.. So .... __________________ KAP-AJS

April 13th, 2012, 10:20 PM	#170
IRISH_EYES_99 Member Join Date: Feb 2001 Location: in the state of confusion :) Posts: 3,524	Vent away DACDjr. If it helps & it's a good way to get things off your chest, then do it. Hope things start straightening out for you. __________________ Smiles are contagious. It's ok to pass them on. *

April 14th, 2012, 09:21 AM	#171
Wolf_angel A survivor of chaos Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: Where my heart is Posts: 3,147	Ok so that means IRISH is Grandma who is ever so sweet and wise and thus I be Mom LOL Seriously just vent away. I know I do here often so why not you? Hugs __________________ May you walk in the shadow of the Great Spirit~To help others is a special gift we can either give or take~The more you give the more you receive~

January 6th, 2013, 11:09 PM	#172
Elusive Unicorn Member Join Date: Dec 2010 Location: Utica,NY Posts: 806	Sometimes we are in a dark place. I know about that pit and I hated it. I clawed myself out of it. I refuse to go back. Every time someone would try and give me a hand up I would slip back in. Took me doing it to get it done. I said to myself no more. Then I finally saw the light of day again. Sometimes the only person you can depend on is yourself when you are in the pit. Some people never get out of it. Some never want to or have lost the way up. Kind of like when divers dive deep and can not find the way up to the surface. We all have dark places inside us. They are not bad to have they help us learn our true strength. Just try not to get lost in there and maybe bring a flashlight to find the way out again. __________________ Any and all typos I may make are in the name of science. My tests will be conclued when ever I get around to it.

January 7th, 2013, 11:46 AM	#173
Wolf_angel A survivor of chaos Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: Where my heart is Posts: 3,147	So eloquent and moving. To the point and shows us what is there. To know we can survive and move to the light. Hugs Good Job Elusive Unicorn __________________ May you walk in the shadow of the Great Spirit~To help others is a special gift we can either give or take~The more you give the more you receive~

January 7th, 2013, 08:27 PM	#174
Elusive Unicorn Member Join Date: Dec 2010 Location: Utica,NY Posts: 806	tyvm Wolfie has taken me a bit to even feel like writing. __________________ Any and all typos I may make are in the name of science. My tests will be conclued when ever I get around to it.

January 9th, 2013, 08:55 AM	#175
Wolf_angel A survivor of chaos Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: Where my heart is Posts: 3,147	In the Shadow of You I am eclipsed by things of the past Like the Moon that rides in the night sky It always seems to linger as its cast Yet despite it all I work to move on To where the sun is shining all day long Making me feel like a new person Then I will know I am finally free of you Where my yesterdays are finally laid to rest. __________________ May you walk in the shadow of the Great Spirit~To help others is a special gift we can either give or take~The more you give the more you receive~

January 9th, 2013, 11:15 AM	#176
Elusive Unicorn Member Join Date: Dec 2010 Location: Utica,NY Posts: 806	I like that wolf angel __________________ Any and all typos I may make are in the name of science. My tests will be conclued when ever I get around to it.

January 9th, 2013, 06:34 PM	#177
Wolf_angel A survivor of chaos Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: Where my heart is Posts: 3,147	Thank You Very Much Elusive Unicorn! I thought it very to the point of my life right now. So if it resonanates within another all the more power to us. Hugs __________________ May you walk in the shadow of the Great Spirit~To help others is a special gift we can either give or take~The more you give the more you receive~

January 9th, 2013, 11:00 PM	#178
crazymomma awesome cookie lady Join Date: May 2003 Location: Leechburgh, PA Posts: 1,993	Nice job ladies __________________ It feels like home to me. Bonnie Rhatt

January 10th, 2013, 12:54 AM	#179
Wolf_angel A survivor of chaos Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: Where my heart is Posts: 3,147	Thank you but I was inspired by Elusive and my own life circumstances of now. Hugs __________________ May you walk in the shadow of the Great Spirit~To help others is a special gift we can either give or take~The more you give the more you receive~

February 18th, 2013, 08:21 PM	#180
IRISH_EYES_99 Member Join Date: Feb 2001 Location: in the state of confusion :) Posts: 3,524	Writing 10 min starting now: Ok it's time I got back on the ball of life. To increase my writing, help to promote memories for my kids & grandkids. Where did their parents grand parents come from. A bit of back ground for them. What life was like way back when we were kids. Is it all that different or the same in different ways? Kids have been after me for this. so I'm practicing 10 min of undisturbed writing.. Ok I know the person writing this may be a bit disturbed oh well get thee over it. lol. I still have about 6 min left. What was life like in the 50s, & beyond, and perhaps a bit before. I'll never really tell, then again will I... hmmmmm. We shall see. Hope you all have an absolutely wonderful day, week, month, year. Don't put off everything for another day. The day may come & you find you can no longer do that which you wanted so badly to do. Am I making sense or nonsense good question. You have to decide for yourself? Has what I said / written make sense to you? Are you able to respond in a positive way? Am I giving you food for thought or not? __________________ Smiles are contagious. It's ok to pass them on. *